This is my favourite Olympic moment from this Year's Olympics. Skateboarding is a new sport at the Olympics and I think scootering should be at the Olympics too. What do you think?
Hello Jacob, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
I loved the way you talked about how Sky Brown got to the Olympics. I also liked how you decorated the blog post and I think it looks amazing.
I haven't seen any of the Olympic skateboarding yet but I probably will sometime. I used to have a skateboard when I was about seven years old but I never learnt how to use it.
To improve this post, you could add some writing about why you chose to write about Sky. At the end, you could add some kind of farewell, it could be as simple as a 'goodbye'.
I think scootering would be cool in the Olympics, I mean if skateboarding is then why not scootering. Something I wish was in the Olympics is jump roping, or skipping. I really love skipping.
Why did you choose Sky Brown to write about? Has Sky Brown got any other medals?
Hello Jacob, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you talked about how Sky Brown got to the Olympics.
I also liked how you decorated the blog post and I think it looks amazing.
I haven't seen any of the Olympic skateboarding yet but I probably will sometime.
I used to have a skateboard when I was about seven years old but I never learnt how to use it.
To improve this post, you could add some writing about why you chose to write about Sky.
At the end, you could add some kind of farewell, it could be as simple as a 'goodbye'.
I think scootering would be cool in the Olympics, I mean if skateboarding is then why not scootering.
Something I wish was in the Olympics is jump roping, or skipping.
I really love skipping.
Why did you choose Sky Brown to write about?
Has Sky Brown got any other medals?
Bye Jacob, keep it up!
Sincerely, Amelia.
Hello my name Josaia from St Pius X School in Glen Innes
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