Thursday, 3 May 2018

titanic

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jacob,
    My name is Carys and I am from Wainui Beach School. I loved reading your blog post. I have cousin named Jacob to. I have not watched the Titanic but I really want to. I also loved the colors you used it really caught my eye and made me want to read more. The only feedback i have is mabe you could include a few more facts. Keep up the good work.

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  2. Hi Jacob, my name is Summer. I liked all the colours you used. I have watched the movie The Titanic and it was really cool. I think that you should add some more facts and check your spelling. What was your favorite part about the movie? Great job!

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