descriptive writing

For writing this week we have been working on descriptive writing. Mrs Clark gave us this picture and we had to use Nouns, Verbs, Adverbs and Adjectives to describe this descriptive writing 

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

Adjectives	Nouns	Verbs	Adverbs
broken	boat	crashed	Loudly
Destroyed	Wood	crashing	Sitting
Cloudy	beach	Tide	Aboundound

                    

MY paragraph

I saw a boat By the tide  the tide was crashing in loudly  the boat was sitting in an abandoned place the sky was really cloudy and scary the boat was all wood and had a big flag on It was sitting right in the middle of the beach It was all broken up and destroyed what have the people done to this old boat it must have crashed or was sitting here for a long time.